I think you could add more details and explain more. Try to go deeper into the meaning of the book. Example: Bobby was teased because of his weight You could change it to: Caused by Bobby's weight, he got teased and that impacted his life,even if it he didn't show it.
In my opinion, if you want to go and do more than the book review, add more textual support. add more insightful thoughts. include the five W's. Write about ur matacognition. write about what you would do if you were in the character's shoes. wait. let me think...
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I think you could add more details and explain more. Try to go deeper into the meaning of the book.
Example: Bobby was teased because of his weight
You could change it to:
Caused by Bobby's weight, he got teased and that impacted his life,even if it he didn't show it.
i agree with izabela. you could leave an insigtful thought and end it with something that makes the reader wonder.
In my opinion, if you want to go and do more than the book review, add more textual support. add more insightful thoughts. include the five W's. Write about ur matacognition. write about what you would do if you were in the character's shoes. wait. let me think...
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